Fanfic Feedback and Comments

[tygertim8]

Hello all,
I've created this thread as an outlet for comments and discussion on the fan fiction projects. Please feel free to comment and discuss pros and cons, what you like and don't like. Please, no trolls or flammers need apply.
Thanks
tygertim8
P.S.
As a fustrated writer, please allow me to direct your attention to The End of Things . . . Thread. I would really like to know what you think of my project.
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[tygertim8]

Good story concept, however, the story suffers from misspellings, run on sentences, and choppy sentences. With a good editing, this story would be a wonderful glimpse into the fall of Caprica!
tygertim8

[tygertim8]

hey, Just thinking of a revision. I think Cinn, in chapter three should figure out a "cylon Detector, in order to fit in with the BSG storyline. I'm working on the scene now.
tygertim8